72 Hours: Uprising (A BR Fanfic Sequel)

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cwisgood		#21	[-]
Posts: 26 (05/20/08 19:54:26) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Ouch. Poor Jessica. I had a feeling she'd die though, when three consecutive... parts were about her. Wonder if Calvin will ever find her mutilated corpse. Edit: Also, does Grendel start with two weapons (the woodsman's ax and the bow-and-arrow/crossbow), or did he find either one in the area? Last Edited By: cwisgood 05/21/08 05:48:10. Edited 1 times.
Baulder.survivorsucks	Boo	#22	[-]
Posts: 3 (05/21/08 06:21:23) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Another great addition to the story Captain. Grendel is a sick character but I think I hate him. I'm glad you are doing the behind the scenes chapters too because I want to know who he is and why he signed up/why they would let him a the girl play again. I also am really liking the imagery of the story being set during the winter.
kelly467		#23	[-]
Posts: 154 (05/21/08 08:59:57) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	I liked that chapter a lot,Grendel automatically reminds me of leather face, i also actually find him pretty scary. Poor Jessica for some reason i always hope that the females characters are going to win againset the male once but i surpose she didnt have any chance. Im sure Calvin will find her, or may turn into some crazy killer when he finds out she is dead through the annoucements.
Luinriel		#24	[-]
Posts: 30 (05/21/08 09:52:53) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	I've only read up til chapter 6 so far (silly school exams..taking time from my fanfic reading) but so far I love it!
timkelsonakacoleholland		#25	[-]
Posts: 39 (05/27/08 04:39:07) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	I love the scene in the movie theatre. Paxton was a dickhead, Scylla's pretty cool! I'm cross-promoting here, but anyways... http://battleroyale31415.yuku.com/topic/2897 Please read and comment. Pretty please? I need some feedback!
Captain Wefnerpletz		#26	[-]
Posts: 325 (05/27/08 10:35:11) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Author's Note: Hello constant readers, just wanted to drop a quick line with a bit of an announcement. For the better portion of June, my girlfriend and I will be on something of an epic road trip around the United States and thus I will not be updating this story. With finals being rather difficult in the next couple of weeks, I will also be unable to do any significant amount of writing. As such, this story will lamentably not be updated until sometime in July. However, as a tease to keep you all interested until the next update occurs, in the next few hours the following will occur: - Isaac reveals his escape plan to a chosen few... - Col. Kinsey faces outside forces as they begin to intrude on the game... - Rich makes a choice between life and death... - As one villain makes their mark, a new threat rises in the game... - While one hero falls, several more join the fray...
Luinriel		#27	[-]
Posts: 32 (05/28/08 06:12:42) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Sounds great! I can't wait!
Captain Wefnerpletz	Hour 8	#28	[-]
Posts: 326 (06/30/08 21:37:49) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Hour 8 is posted! 46 Contestants and 64 Hours remain! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4230960/17/72_Hours_Uprising
cwisgood		#29	[-]
Posts: 69 (06/30/08 22:59:12) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	It's back! I really like Gillian so far. For one second I thought she'd be the Geiger of the story and end up dying and providing a villain with a powerful weapon, but I'm glad she survived this hour. Just noticed something - did Glen magically transform into a Tim? Last Edited By: cwisgood 07/01/08 04:30:01. Edited 1 times.
Captain Wefnerpletz		#30	[-]
Posts: 327 (07/06/08 23:13:54) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Another Behind The Scenes look at the making of The Eighth Annual United States Battle Royale has been posted! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4230960/18/72_Hours_Uprising As for cwisgood's notes: - Thanks for the catch on the Glen/Tim thing; the character was originally named Tim, but I changed it to Glen shortly before publishing. Still, the mind tends to think of characters as they were and doesn't always catch the changes. I've edited the chapter accordingly and the changes should be up soon. Thanks! - Grendel and Scylla were both allowed to bring whatever and as many weapons as they desired into the game, as they were hired for the purposes of making things interesting.
kelly467		#31	[-]
Posts: 155 (07/10/08 10:29:12) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	im liking the new chapters..however i think im getting a tad confused with all the characters. is it possible you could tell me which charatcters are currently at the church? also how many people have we still not seen in the game. Im sure a girl named kendal was mentioned somewhere?..lol maybe i should re read the chapters
Captain Wefnerpletz	Church Crowd	#32	[-]
Posts: 328 (07/10/08 13:46:20) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Contestants in the Church include: Boy # 2: Glen Counihan Boy # 4: Hugo Diaz Boy # 16: Jordan Miike Boy # 17: Isaac Freemantle Boy # 18: Conrad Ripley Boy # 20: Darwin Wong Girl # 1: Mallory Bell Girl # 3: Lakisha Childs Girl # 4: Stacey Golden Girl # 5: Amber Miike Girl # 6: Sophia Apollinar Girl # 19: Julie Hewitt Girl # 20: Hera Morgan Girl # 24: Christina Montressor Some characters still have not been shown prominently, but as with the first story everyone will get their due in time.
CallTheShots		#33	[-]
Posts: 3 (07/15/08 13:00:14) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	These updates take soooo long. I crave them! And as interesting as the 'Behind the Scenes' chapters are, I hope there aren't too many as I really want the focus to be on the game... but I expect the game to be invaded by the Raptors at some point... however, knowing the strength of your past villains (Joel, Marie), the goodies will only get so far! Looking forward to Madison's chapter, she seems interesting.
Captain Wefnerpletz	Hour 9	#34	[-]
Posts: 329 (07/15/08 22:26:49) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Hour 9 is posted! 46 Contestants and 63 Hours remain! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4230960/19/72_Hours_Uprising
CallTheShots		#35	[-]
Posts: 4 (07/16/08 13:06:44) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Great chapter, already left a review as 'blasphemousbrat' on fanfiction.net. Bit of a shock to see Alan Wiles die... hope more is up soon!
CallTheShots	the class list as it stands so far.. (spoilers)	#36	[-]
Posts: 5 (07/18/08 14:26:38) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Roster of Students Taken from Amberlaine High School December 19, 2007 B1: Miller, Rich G1: Bell, Mallory B2: Counihan, Glen G2: Rawlings, Kerry B3: Chidester, Eugene G3: Childs, Lakisha B4: Diaz, Hugo G4: Golden, Stacey B5: Wood, Ruben G5: Miike, Amber B6: Bautista, Carlos G6: Apollinar, Sophia B7: Epstein, Amos ~~G7:~~ ~~Cruz, Misty~~ Shot in the head by Boy # 14 Frank Luczak 50th Place B8: Haddad, Aziz G8: Serov, Natalya ~~B9:~~ ~~King, Nick~~ Poisoned with Gas by Boy # 24 Nick McIntyre 48th Place ~~G9:~~ ~~Caldwell, Zora~~ Neck wound caused by Boy # 9 Nick King 52nd Place B10: Dartanian, CJ G10: Stavros, Gillian B11: Spencer, Calvin G11: Valverde, Phoebe B12: Archer, Shaun G12: Argento, Cynthia B13: Sharafi, Basim G13: Halsey, Diana B14: Luczak, Frank G14: Holland, Madison ~~B15:~~ ~~Wiles, Alan~~ Shot by Boy # 1 Rich Miller 46th Place G15: Lennon, Brenda B16: Miike, Jordan G16: Bourne, Sadie B17: Freemantle, Isaac ~~G17:~~ ~~Baldwin, Nicole~~ Beaten/Hanged by Girl # 16 Sadie Bourne 51st Place B18: Ripley, Conrad G18: Marquette, Amanda B19: Hudson, Randal G19: Hewitt, Julie B20: Wong, Darwin G20: Morgan, Hera B21: Cilek, Iago ~~G21:~~ ~~Tyler, Jessica~~ Mutilated by Boy # 26 Grendel 47th Place ~~B22:~~ ~~Algers, Paxton~~ Decapitated by Boy # 21 Iago Cilek 49th Place G22: Fuchs, Kendal B23: Benedict, Vic G23: Fallon, Alyssa B24: McIntyre, Nick G24: Montressor, Christina B25: Doerner, Chad G25: Foucalt, Rene B26: Codename: Grendel G26: Codename: Scylla
Captain Wefnerpletz	Hour 10	#37	[-]
Posts: 330 (07/18/08 22:04:39) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Hour 10 is posted! 45 Contestants and 62 Hours remain! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4230960/20/72_Hours_Uprising
Luinriel		#38	[-]
Posts: 55 (07/19/08 09:41:55) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Gonna read it soon. Loving the story so far.
helofalco		#39	[-]
Posts: 176 (07/19/08 10:00:44) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	ive just started the first 72 hours and omg its the best fanfic ive ever read
kelly467		#40	[-]
Posts: 156 (07/19/08 19:52:27) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	I loved the last chapter, im now finally getting used to the characters and im loving it. I cant see Phoebe lasting to long now that she has ran away from the group at the bowling ally. She seems a very sterotypical horror movie girl who usally meet a bloody end early on. Im liking the sound of Amanda and Kendal a lot ,this is mainly because i like the females who fight and apart from Sadie there hasn't been that many. Im hoping they last a little longer and that Grendal doesnt kill them. I have a feeling Amanda is going to sacrifice Kendal so that she can make a run for it when/if Gendal attacks. Its also good to see Frank again. hes a very interesting character. I also like how we see what other char:Dacters have been up to which doesnt need much of a mention for example gillian taking medical surplys and i think in an early character we learned Frank had raded the police station before nick got there.

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